Ruskin tells Heaton she is most tolerant person he knows. He goes on to advise her on her writing style, suggesting she makes her use of pronouns consistent, better utilizes the active voice and makes her sentences more concise. He objects to her anthropomorphization of animals and the weather. He advises Heaton to make her caterpillar "full of Caterpillar faults - like a poor mortal" and suggests she change the caterpillar's characterization. Ruskin says he hasn't acquired her Venice photos yet but that he will be able to now that he has finished "something" [Notes on the Turner Gallery at Marlborough House, 1856]. He ends by saying that her Turner piece, Aldborough, is "a trump of a drawing" and that she "will never tire of it, it's glorious.".